Paragraph (With Errors)
The dog barked loudly as it chases the squirrel up the tree. It's owner called it back, but it ignores the command. Finally, after much coaxing, the dog reluctantly returns.
Paragraph (Corrected)
The dog barked loudly as it chased the squirrel up the tree. Its owner called it back, but it ignored the command. Finally, after much coaxing, the dog reluctantly returned.